ext_30907 ([identity profile] alexfoster451.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ingoodsentences 2010-06-27 04:50 am (UTC)

Okay, so I've been really bad about commenting on your fics here. I've been so caught up in personal stuff in real life that I've been just reading and fleeing.

I'm going to try and make up for that because I think you need to understand just how awesome you are at this writing thing.

I have toyed with writing the trio as a trio for challenges, but what I wrote always felt off to me. Nothing feels off here. In fact I thought it was brilliant.

I love the building of Sam's plan and how well she played everyone involved until she wasn't and even then was still the one taking the lead.

Everyone was perfectly in character, I thought, and it was very well told. I hope you write more for this story. :)

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